I made two stabs at reading it but the style reminded me of James Fenimore Cooper . . . awkward beyond belief. My strongest recommendation is use the Word "grammer" tool and bring the reading level down to at least undergraduate college. Regardless, here is what I got from the report:

"Hybrids are making a shift in driver attitudes."

I think there is merit in classifying these shifts but they need to be organized into a taxometry. Then elaborate and provide the supporting data.

It may help to start with an an outline and keep it as a table of contents. Then block move the text around to fit the structure. Finally, cull the unnecessary, tighten the prose, and bring it back.

Bob Wilson

Operation Iraqi Oil Freedom:

Automatic, stock, project car.

My other 1500 cc car:

Automatic, stock, backup car.
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